Beautiful poem, Aaryn! I love "exhaling briny breath" and you did a great job of intertwining your lived experience with the nostalgic past of your ancestors. Very visceral. Thanks for sharing! I love a good ocean poem.
Thank you for saying so ๐ It was a first stab at combining what to me at first felt like two very different experiences. Iโm glad you enjoyed it ๐
Beautiful poem, Aaryn! I love "exhaling briny breath" and you did a great job of intertwining your lived experience with the nostalgic past of your ancestors. Very visceral. Thanks for sharing! I love a good ocean poem.
Thank you for saying so ๐ It was a first stab at combining what to me at first felt like two very different experiences. Iโm glad you enjoyed it ๐